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Created with Photoshop CS6 and Intuos 4 tablet.

I wanted to create a Star Wars style concept scene, the complex in the background is a military base in an outer rim planet, including a huge communications facility. Background adjusted from PDP desert sunrise 601.

In the foreground is a security detail on patrol and the craft dropping off change of shift. The ship concept will be following soon.


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:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Impact

Sorry this is a short critique.
The lighting color and sense of depth are really good. The picture is very evocative and I immediately liked it. My only constructive criticism is the perspective. It's only a small niggle, but we should, being lower in altitude, be able to see the underside of the mushroom dome. As it is, the base of the top mushroom dome section appears as a line parallel to the horizon. As the dome is circular in plan view, and as it is actually above the observer, the edge of the base of the top dome should scribe an oval rather than a line. This is what distracts me from fully enjoying the otherwise beautiful and powerful scene. The way it looks to me as you have rendered it, is that the mushroom shaped building is leaning directly toward the observer a bit like he leaning tower of Pisa.
I would absolutely love to see a perspective corrected version of this. Then I'd give it 5stars.

Your friend,

James